In literacy today we were talking about jack frost. we had to write about the ice could whether is was fun. first we planed together we had to think about wow words and we sat in a circle. next we had to write our story and do the writing prose.
I hope you like my story.
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ReplyDeleteHi Joslyne I really like how you described it well.I know it is really cold in the morning but hey its winter so get use to it. Maybe next time you could add a picture Evan though I do get a picture in my head it will be cold if there was an actual picture. This is so good I'm wondering how long did this take you? , it would take me about 5 hours LOL Bye Good Job.
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DeleteThank you Harmony for your helpful,thoughtful,positive and question comment. By the way it took me around about 25 minutes. I will be sure to go to your blog bye bye.
DeleteWow Joslyne I really love how you explained how cold you felt.
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DeleteHi mum. Thank you for your lovely comment. Next time can you add helpful,thoughtful,positive and question please but I can see you have put positive so thank you for that. Bye bye
Deleteyou're writing was so good
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