This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
You've listed some great sunsmart staples there Joslyne. I like how you've included an image to represent each of your points. Drinking plenty of water in the summer months is so important, isn't it? We should get in the habit of doing it all year 'round but our bodies tend to become dehydrated a lot quicker when we're out in the sunshine, so having a drink bottle with you is a really good idea. And using an environmentally friendly, reusable drink bottle is even better! :)
Next time, try to complete your list in full sentences so your readers can understand exactly what it is you are talking about. Other than that, great work Joslyne. :)
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ReplyDeleteYou've listed some great sunsmart staples there Joslyne. I like how you've included an image to represent each of your points. Drinking plenty of water in the summer months is so important, isn't it? We should get in the habit of doing it all year 'round but our bodies tend to become dehydrated a lot quicker when we're out in the sunshine, so having a drink bottle with you is a really good idea. And using an environmentally friendly, reusable drink bottle is even better! :)
Next time, try to complete your list in full sentences so your readers can understand exactly what it is you are talking about. Other than that, great work Joslyne. :)
Happy blogging!
Mikey :)