This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Joslyne What a great job of drawing yourself, the colours you chose really made it stand out. I like reading too and I am enjoying listening to James and the Giant Peach when I am in your room. Roald Dahl is a good writer. Do you have a favourite author or book?
Hi Joslyne I like how you made yourself with shapes. It looks really detailed. I like the way you put yourself in a frame.I also like the colors of the background how its a gradient. Next time could you maybe make the text a bit bigger. Do you have a second favourite colour? My favourite colour is aqua and neon yellow.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Joslyne
ReplyDeleteWhat a great job of drawing yourself, the colours you chose really made it stand out. I like reading too and I am enjoying listening to James and the Giant Peach when I am in your room. Roald Dahl is a good writer. Do you have a favourite author or book?
Mrs S
Hi Joslyne
ReplyDeleteI like how you made yourself with shapes. It looks really detailed. I like the way you put yourself in a frame.I also like the colors of the background how its a gradient.
Next time could you maybe make the text a bit bigger. Do you have a second favourite colour? My favourite colour is aqua and neon yellow.