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Friday, 12 April 2019

Halswell Quarry

For the past few days Miss Goslins literacy class wrote about a Moment in time and the Halswell Quarry we used our senses in our story like what it smelt like, what it felt like, and also what it looks like. This is my writing about a Moment in time at the Halswell Quarry. Comment down below for some if you have some feedback, Bye!
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  1. Miss GoslinApril 28, 2019 5:48 pm

    Hi Joslyne, Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your story. I like how you sounded out the words you were unsure of. Next time I would like you to re read your writing to see if you need to add any punctuation.
    Looking forward to hearing back from you.
    Miss Goslin

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  2. AnonymousJune 11, 2019 3:45 pm

    Hi miss Goslin I appreciate it I will try to add punctuation and re read my story. I will see you at school.

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