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Friday 10 May 2019

how to tack care of a rat

In writing we have been writing about how to write instructions I choose how to tack care of a rat. we had to say what you need and step by step so here is my story hope you enjoy it.


What you need

1.  Small bird cage

2. Small Chew toy,  old Pipes (small)

3. News paper

4. water boll, food boll

5. small hut

6. Veg,fruit scraps



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Instructions

Step 1 fresh veg,fruit in the bowl and freshwater in the bowl every day

Step 2 clean newspaper and new newspaper at the bottom of the cage

Step 3 wash the rat 1 time a week it might not like it.

Step 4 brush the fur if it looks knotty.

Step 5 play with your rat.

The end

2 comments:

  1. Hi Joslyne I like the way you described your writing. Maybe you can work on next time more word in it and more pressies vocabulary.
    Talk soon
    Regards
    Aone

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  2. Hi Aone. Thank you for you comment. I will try to be more pressies with my words.
    Talk soon bye

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